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Just a quick drawin' 8D Asnja tock the photo on her motocross trainin' lol, this took me like 4 hours, I made this all with Paint Tool SAI except some movement effects and subtitles c: 

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Art, Character © :iconmajinbanzai: 2016

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Critique by Ulysess99 Mar 30, 2016, 11:25:49 AM
I would suggest making the background a bit less blurred considering you tried to make it look like a professional movie, as well as lessening the lens flare because it is distracting and takes attention away from the anthropomorphic hyena. I would also suggest that there would be more 'fur' effects upon the arms, due to the arms of the heyna looking like normal skin. I would also suggest that an outline could be on the teeth to create an impression of depth upon the character, this will make your character stand out more, while also reinforcing the fact that Hyenas are predatory animals. Also have a stronger outline on your characters ears, due to the current outline makes it look like they are skin flaps.

However all in all it is a good piece of art, however with the suggestions given it could rise to even more prominence.
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